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Jeffrey Carter
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0 posted 2000-08-04 07:40 PM




I lay there in utter disbelief
With my head upon your breast
Contemplating happiness, thinking
Is this life at it's best?

I feel your gentle fingers
Running through my hair
And I know that love is real
Cause I can feel it there

You lean down to kiss my lips
And I breath your essence in
Holding you so tight and warm
Now there's goosebumps on my skin

So nervous in this situation
Yet, not wanting to let go
The mere touch of your sweet lips
Sends shivers from head to toe

In the background TV playing quietly
As your back arches at my touch
Of all the things of my life
Never wanted anything so much



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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-08-04 08:10 PM


Jeffrey~

Making PopCorn here !
And you just melted the butter !

Delightfully, sensually tender !
~*Marge*~





~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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2 posted 2000-08-04 09:37 PM


Jeffrey, such a succulent scene you've set before your reader. Lovely.

~ Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau


Janet Marie
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3 posted 2000-08-04 10:19 PM


LOL at Margie..tsk tsk  

my my my jeff-gator...
this is toasty and tasty...
and emotionally blissfull...
love ya when your sensual
later-in-love-gator
jm

There are places inside our souls -
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts -
that need to be loved this much.
~jm~


Lone Wolf
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4 posted 2000-08-04 10:31 PM


Jeffrey,

Soft, sweet, and romantic scene you have filmed here my friend.  Very nice writing.  I like this one.  Don't think it gets much better than that.  

Jenn




Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

Jenn E
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5 posted 2000-08-04 11:01 PM


OH this was so lovely, warm and sweet.........This was great mind movie, I must go now...and play it again....  

Jenn E

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6 posted 2000-08-04 11:06 PM


Oh Geez Marge, POPCORN! While JC's doing this!? I don't think so!
Jeffrey Carter
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7 posted 2000-08-05 12:19 PM


OMGGGG Close the blinds!!!!

Thanks Marge....LMAO

Claire.....I didn't do it (grin)

JM.....Can you believe that Marge was peeking in my window? LOL

Jenn......thank you  

Jenn E (not to be confused with Jenn).... my memories are my movies, and this one gets 2 thumbs up

Sunshine.....I couldn't believe it....Marge of all people looking in my window LMAO

Marge , you know I love ya and I'm only picking on you don't you? Good....LOL

Kyle aka Huck
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8 posted 2000-08-05 12:39 PM


Hey this is great< !signature-->



[This message has been edited by Kyle aka Huck (edited 08-05-2000).]

Paula Finn
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9 posted 2000-08-05 01:00 AM


SSSSIIIGGHHHHHHHHH....

never say never

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10 posted 2000-08-05 01:12 PM


Jeffrey, darlin'~
I openly admit to being a Peeping-Marge !
Honey, the scenes are just so REAL TO REEL !

Hoping to catch the re-runs !
Thanks for leaving the blinds open ! !
Love ya'
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Jeffrey Carter
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11 posted 2000-08-05 06:24 PM


Marge, I'll leave them open for you anytime darlin'

See ya' same time next dream  

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12 posted 2000-08-08 01:40 PM


Where do I get a ticket to this movie?  

Kay-lynn
**A dream is a wish your heart makes :)


Jeffrey Carter
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13 posted 2000-08-08 06:08 PM


Kay-lynn, all you gotta do is ask.....which you just did .......so here ya go  
Rosebud1229
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14 posted 2000-08-08 11:09 PM


YOu've did your magic once again such passionate words are so amazing. That they would come from your heart and through your fingers.Very graceful and so romantic.
Diana Kessler
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15 posted 2000-08-13 02:52 PM


Hot! Very hot!
Great talent here.

JamesMichael
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16 posted 2000-08-13 03:41 PM


Now you have me thinking about kissing a certain woman...no not just a kiss....a long passionalte sensual kiss...touching, breathing, smelling, feeling the sensations...James
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17 posted 2000-08-13 04:37 PM


This isn't the real Chris responding, I'm his evil twin... the one who likes sweet, warm, caring people.

Jeffrey, this rocks I love it man! You truly have a gift for the namesake of our home here... Passion.

Chris (the evil twin Chris)

Jeffrey Carter
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18 posted 2000-08-13 06:03 PM


Rosebud.......I only wrote what I felt

Diana.........Thanks and Welcome to Passion's

James.........Oh yeahhhh...that's my kind of kiss  LOL

and last but certainly not least

Christopher....whichever one you are, you have certainly made my day with this reply.......and btw, I still think that you are the infamous Bruce LOL

redwriter1
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19 posted 2000-08-13 08:37 PM


ok.. im using my ticket to bump it back to the top.!..

(smile)

Mark Bohannan
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20 posted 2000-08-13 08:45 PM


Hey thanks man...now I know what to watch on my next date.  Sensuous and much much too hot for the young at heart.  

*Marge- may I see some I.D. please?

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