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Open Poetry #9

Sundancer By The Sea

Mona Lisa
Member

since 1999-08-25

Posts 100
Halifax, Nova Scotia

0 posted 2000-08-04 07:01 PM

In her coral sundress she spins and twirls,
beneath the clouds and cotton swirls.

As if under a spotlight, with symphony grand,
she pirouettes graciously on grains of sand.

Her audience is nature, in blues and greens,
admiring with interest, this amusing scene.

All alone, unhindered and totally free,
she continues to dance with undaunted glee.

Then a bird hovers by, and makes his decent,
as if to approve this charming event.

But n'ere did she notice, n'ere did she see.
So lost in the moment, sundancer by sea.

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

1 posted 2000-08-04 08:01 PM

a beautiful poem wonderful scene

"I am melancholy, flower cutting through stone"
manic street preachers

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2000-08-04 08:15 PM

MonaLisa~
Simply enchanting !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Eloise
Senior Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 1096
Wyoming

3 posted 2000-08-04 09:15 PM

Mona Lisa, so captivating was this piece. Thoroughly enjoyed it.

Mona Lisa
Member

since 1999-08-25

Posts 100
Halifax, Nova Scotia

4 posted 2000-08-05 01:33 AM

Thanks to all of you for you kind comments.

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