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How Lucky I Am (an attempt at Tanka..)
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How Lucky I Am (an attempt at Tanka..) |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
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I look at you now My eyes shining bright with love How lucky I am Knowing your wonderful soul Having you here close to me |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
rp25.... I must admit that I'm not too familiar with Tanka, but the words you wrote are equisite!!!!!! I truly loved this one!! I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RosePetals~ Perfection of form Not so easy to define Perfecta Mundo ! Just so perfect is your rhyme Tanka you so very much !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Sunny - Yesterdsay I saw a link in a reply..I think Marge posted it.. to a poetry website. They had a section on Japanese poetry, Tanka being one of the forms of poetry. It grabbed my attention so I thought I would try my hand at it I glad you liked it.. thank you for your sweet words. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Marge thank you my friend Your nice words mean oh so much It was a challenge This poetry called Tanka But it was worth it.. I’m hooked!  rosepetals |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Umm.. that was suppose to be centered..lol. Thank you Marge for the compliment They are greatly appreciated |
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