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The Kiss |
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guiliano New Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 8new york city |
THE KISS The kiss use to be the awakenings of young romance a symbol of take me further, your eyes close a wet sensation shared the opening of souls as i grew older the kiss had changed a sacred innocence set wild yet tamed had become a door to reckless sex the young had no idea that first kiss was sacred a gift from the gods, a giggle from angels young lovers confused by physical unknowns wasted the kiss to gamble for more as new lovers my eyes reached deep down her soul and i leaned towards her gift of words and my lips softly, gently pressed her own with wild sensations so powerful my eyes must have closed i tasted the musical instrument which captivated my desires, her lips so soft i must live this kiss again i held her hand , she smiling gazed at me, silence we walked down the country road oblivious of the world sharing thoughts and memories that tickled our flesh and minds to no end i kneeled down to pick her a strawberry from a strawberry field. yes i had picked the best one of them all and fed it to her open lips gently cleaning the juices with the back of my fingers so as not to stain her white sun dress, she giggled impatiently and socked me in the stomach she ran down the road insane with passion laughing chilled anticipating what the man with wild eyes would somehow get romantic revenge............ i finally caught her by the arm, she giggling out of control swore it was a reflex. i said yeah rite this calls for the ancient Sicilian torture she said,'WHAT THE HELL IS THAT???' laughing.... i said girl you are sentenced to the SPIRIT KISS!! 'BUT WHATS THAT??? SHE CRIED IN CURIOSITY we found a short grassy opening aways off the road i laid her down gently next to me and told her the rules must not be broken or we have to start over, first the SPIRIT KISS IS A VERY BEAUTIFUL THING .I THEN KISSED HER AND SHE ME SOFTLY CRAZY A LOVER'S LIPS,EYES,NECK,....... THE RULES WERE WE HOLD HANDS ON OUR SIDES BUT WE GET AS CLOSE AS WE CAN TO EACH OTHER LIPS WITHOUT TOUCHING AND STARE DEEPLY INTO EACH OTHERS EYES WITHOUT MOVING PEERING INTO EACH OTHERS WINDOWS TO THE SOUL AND MEDITATE ON EACH OTHER AND YOUR MIND CAN WANDER TO FANTASIES TO DREAMS JUST LET IT LOOSE BUT NEVER , NEVER BREAK THE SPIRIT KISS YOU GOT IT GIRL??? SHE SAID'yyyeeeaaahhhhhh.........IT HAS BEGUN, SILENCE PLLEEEAASSSSSEE!!!!!!!!!!!!! one hour and ten minutes i broke the trance with the question, 'Have you ever seen the movie taxi driver with robert deniro,great movie' her eyes still wide open she jumped to her feet with a look like she saw a ghost! i asked are you ok kid, 'She said get another strawberry' "Takes it easy, baby Take it as it comes Don't move too fast And you want your love to last Oh, you've been movin' much too fast" =(The Door |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Well, this was some date and one helluva kiss--or was it three? Welcome to Passions, my friend--where it's hard to count the kisses! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi guiliano.... Mmmmmmmmmm....haven't read a kiss like that in a LONG time!!!!!!!!! (Nice way to start the day, for me, anyway!!) Loved this refreshing piece, and I also would like to say: WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!!! now....back to the kissing!! I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
guiliano--What an entrance...welcome, what a kiss and an interesting poem! |
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