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On Tiptoe Feet
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On Tiptoe Feet |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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On Tiptoe Feet On tiptoe feet it comes so soft Like haze rolls in the waterfront Mysteriously it hangs aloft Until the moment of your want So silently it draws you near With out a single word or cue Unannounced it fast appears And tenderly embraces you It changes everything you see The past is past, the present’s now The future is a blissful dream No matter where or when or how It is the power of love that comes On tiptoe feet into your heart So delicately it overcomes Without a warning, plays it’s part It gives you peace, like rippled pond It makes your heart sing sweeter tunes And everything of which your fond A thousand fold your soul consumes Your heart hangs on to music’s strings It’s captured in a sunset’s glow It dances as the swallow sings It follows in the water’s flow Your eyes reflect the twinkling stars The glowing moon, the candlelight Your face casts smiles from afar You fondly wait the tender night You feel the rhythm of the sea Your blood runs to a lover’s beat This change in life is meant to be When love comes in on tiptoe feet Elizabeth Santos |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wish I could write like this...  Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Me too...  If only wishes were horses... I could try riding a few... regards to you Liz, Sudhir |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth~ You hold the golden quill, dipped in the inkwell of your very being. Oh, my ! How lovely ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Lovely indeed!!! I do so enjoy reading your ever flowing, always beautiful words. Bonnie |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
So soft and a beautiful reminder of love! Corinne |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Liz, this truely came into my heart on Tiptoe feet. I love the way you write dear poet. Parker |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Liz--You have described the feeling perfectly...beautifully done! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
What can I say that I haven't said before... So, please accept these smiles galore...  A fine piece of poetry Elizabeth! |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
Wow, wow, wow... A smile, the whole poem through! Love, captured on a page. Incredible! My hat is tipped to you, yet again. Trev. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Wow Liz....you been reading my heart!!! How did you do that? Absolutely stunning and full of SUNSHINE. [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 09-02-2000).] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Coco, seems like you tiptoe through the back pages of the forum and find poems that have been left to obscurity. Thank you for finding this and for your kind remarks. It gives me a chance to thank all those who responded to this poem without my realizing. I appreciate all of your comments Thank you Liz |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I'll tiptoe in to whisper how sweetly these words sang Liz ... you've described the gentle tug of the heart beautifully! Very nicely penned! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
How dare you use my name in one of your works of art to further your popularity! How are ya gal?..Hope things are going well for-ya..miss everyone sooooooo much! Nice job here....have you ever written a bad one?....damn! |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Hi Liz, This is one of the best descriptions of love I've seen in awhile...beautifully done...I've often see it sneak up on tip toe feet. Wonderful, isn't it? I want to thank you for visiting my web site and the kind things you had to say. That was a nice surprise to wake up to this morning. I hope your day is a pleasant one, my friend. Michael Proust- "Love is space and time measured by the heart" |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Kit, Thank you, my poet twin, Glad you likr it Toe, I was just trying to give you a plug. You've been gone so long, somr of the new poets might not know you, so this is a tip to Toe poem. Nice to have you back. It's better when you're here Michael, I must say, I'm very fond of your writing and enjoyed you're site, although I didn't get halfway through the poetry, I'll treat myself and go back again soon. Thank you for reading my poem and for your kind comments Liz |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
I read slowly - thinking Carl Sandburg at the beginning (The Fog) as I got further into it it became clear you weren't talking Fog - and as Love became clear - I was totally entranced - moreover - you poem 'flowed' beautifully. wonderful Erite Liz |
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