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MMoonchild
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0 posted 2000-08-04 06:19 AM




I could...................send you
a card of fancy......design, and words
written by others to express thoughts of
mine, but I would rather the words, come
straight from my heart, no interference, no
prissy parts, only the feelings, inside that I
hold, treasured....and.......wrapped in my
memories of gold...everyday words and
everyday cares...and...everyday
memories together to share,
I would kiss them
in thoughts
and
breeze
them to you, on
the wings of the wind on
the morning's tears, dew...and if
that doesn't touch...the deep within
you, I will send them in moonbeams to
shine upon two, the one in my heart and the
one I wait for...my touching shall travel...'til it
reaches your door, as it unlocks with key the
treasure that.....hides...as.....my whispering
thoughts leave their imprints to guide when
the...morning...sun rises..with me in your
glance..I'll...be............waiting, I will to
join you...................in dance
M...............................M

M
*wanted to show you I could do it...*s




© Copyright 2000 Maureen - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2000-08-04 06:27 AM


Heart to heart...two hearts together...embracable hearts..
I like the way you wrote this..nice message..James

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2000-08-04 07:46 AM


Maureen~
You KNOW I like this ...
and Mark will love it too !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Sudhir Iyer
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3 posted 2000-08-04 07:48 AM


I am certain Mark will like this...

Nice work, Maureen...

regards
sudhir

MMoonchild
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4 posted 2000-08-04 07:58 AM


Marge and Sudhir...I have been up since 9P.M. last night  and it took me until 6 a.m. to respond on here and to  write and  get this formation correct to show Mark that I use periods  instead of spaces to make my patterned poetry... It was written to  someone else but demonstrated for Mark..
~~thanking you both before I eat and  go to bed........my eyes actually hurt..
(my aol kept booting me for some illegal operation all night..so I kept losing my posts just as I was about to submit..hmmm that doesn't sound too good ..the submitting and illegal stuff huh...see I am  punchy now..goodnight)
MM

Mark Bohannan
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5 posted 2000-08-04 10:05 AM


Maureen-First off...I had no doubt that you could do this and I thank you for your dedication.  The poem is lovely and whomever it was written for is one lucky man.....providing that he  ever listens.  Thanks again and yes you know it will go in my file.   
MMoonchild
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6 posted 2000-08-04 11:45 AM


thank you Mark and ocassionally   someone does listen to me...
~~soft smiles
Maureen..

yours was very hard as it was such a long heart that is why I made mine into two...*S

MMoonchild
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7 posted 2000-08-05 07:30 AM


James..sorry I almost  forgot you...it's hard lately..not getting enough sleep...thank you for your kind words and for stopping to read my poems
~~soft hugs
Maureen

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