Good bye God (If you do not like strong language, please do not read)

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Good bye God (If you do not like strong language, please do not read)

Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2000-08-04 02:21 AM

Well god you've managed it,
my supple being of dirt
and pain and anguish,
you really have managed it.
I looked for him for how long,
sent letters to every ****y
little town he had been
and for nothing, for your plan!
Now I sit on the phone
and hear he's gone,
gone to a better place
a better spot, bull****.
He was a drunk, and adicted
to vices you created,
to feelings you helped father,
to a life where he called out.
And i wanted to find him,
I new of his danger,
I new of his lack of comfort,
I wanted to help him.
You could'nt wait could you!
To put your grand hands
on another failure,
another lost soul comes to daddy.
God, I really don't understand
I really don't know why,
What the hell have I done?
One more hit to my heart.
I used to pray, you know that
to a mother, father and son
of wisdom and the trinity
a good Irish boy I was.
But I'm done with you,
I'm done with you ripping me,
my heart and soul I claim,
this earth is my domain.
As for Andrew, I will weep
and keep his savored kisses to me,
his laughter, his tears and his face
are mine in my memories.
So, once more to bury a friend
thanks so much god for your plan
I think I've enjoyed enough,
God, when is it not so tough?

sosweet82
Junior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 17
Phoenix, AZ

1 posted 2000-08-04 02:31 AM

That was well wrote. You said a lot of thing I only wish I could say. I hope that the pain goes away soon for you. Samantha

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

2 posted 2000-08-08 12:32 PM

Very much felt and I also hope that as each day passes you will feel joy replacing your pain.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2000-08-08 12:43 PM

MichaelG~ this is so full of anger and pain, I'm sorry you're hurting....-SEA

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