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topnotch707
Junior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 16
vallejo, cali, usa

0 posted 2000-08-04 01:26 AM


The first time we met
I couldn't belive my eyes,
for standing before me
was the heavens and the skies.
Your presence so charming
the smile on your face,
you are my prince charming
full of hope and of grace.
I couldn't belive it
I finally found the one,
to love me for me
not just a love on the run.
We share quality moments
I hold deep in my heart,
even though we argue
we will never fall apart.
You treat me so royal
as if I were a queen,
just us being together
makes such a beutiful scene.
Your passionate being
the caressing ways,
lift up my soul
and takes the pain away.
Don't ever doubt me
i'll be by your side,
I will love you forever
until the day that I die.

Dedicated to the love of my life, Hassan Ali.



© Copyright 2000 Rebecca Vieu - All Rights Reserved
insect
Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014

1 posted 2000-08-05 11:58 PM


Nice poem for the love of your life!
*Welcome to passions

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
2 posted 2000-08-06 01:18 AM


Hi topnotch....

         The love of your life will surely
      be delighted to receive this!!
         This is a great poem, and tells
      how deeply you feel.....beautiful...

           Welcome to the family, and
             hope to read more of you!!!< !signature-->

I have but one goal in
life.........
To make you smile!
   ~~ Sunny ~~



[This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 08-06-2000).]

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