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Open Poetry #9

Outstretched Hand

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

0 posted 2000-08-04 12:36 PM

I see you my dear friend
I see the tears you shed
I feel the pain you go through
Here’s my outstretched hand
Take it and I will pull you up
Use my strength
That I give openly give to you
Take my words and learn to heal
And know that I love you
You have given much to me
And now I am here for you
To lean on and depend on
With a willing ear
With an open heart.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2000-08-04 02:15 AM

RosePetals~
A lovely extension of your friendship.
Loving friends are such an
important part of our lives.
I'm sure your friend feels the
comfort that you offer.

~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

T McCoy
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since 2000-07-24

Posts 186

2 posted 2000-08-04 04:02 AM

YOU are a great friend and
THAT was great writing...!

Tony

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2000-08-04 04:06 AM

Rosepetals the warmth and comfort expressed here is beautiful and you have put it across so well.

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

4 posted 2000-08-04 04:12 AM

Well said
You obviously have much to offer your friend in a time of need and I'm sure they appreciate you. Have you shown them this ??? I hope you have

Tracie~

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
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5 posted 2000-08-04 01:09 PM

Thank you everyone for stopping in to read

And Tracie, he will get it soon. Unfortunately he lives on the other side of the country.. (I'm in PA.. he is in Seattle..) I sent the letter off today

Christopher

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

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Purgatorial Incarceration

6 posted 2000-08-04 01:21 PM

Friends like this are beautiful, few, and far between!

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

7 posted 2000-08-04 01:47 PM

I'm glad you liked it

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

8 posted 2004-05-02 07:51 PM

lucky friend

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