Addiction of the Mind(not to mention body)

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Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

0 posted 2000-08-03 11:57 PM

Am I addicted to your words so fair?
So often that we share.
I feel as if I'm in a haven,
that you have been saving only for me.

Am I addicted to your wit?
That often contradicts my way of thinking,
only briefly, and then were very much nsync.

Addiction of the wildest kind.
I'm to deep now I have to find,
the only thing that makes me breath
the words from you that much succeed
in making me closer to you.

Am I addicted to your style?
The way you make me smile,
not to mention the slightest blush

Though the day goes by quickly.
It seems I often swiftly,
think back of your words.
That keep me so addicted to your thoughts.
That seem to coincide with mine.

So here I write this poetry,
with quite abit of glee
for the rhythm of my heart seems to skip a beat,
but brings music to my heart.

Can you feel the music within you?
That often seems unsung.
Let loose the songs of love
So you will feel the ease of joy.
That brings life into us now.
Kiss me back to life, revive my heart.

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Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-08-04 12:25 PM

Can you feel the music within you?
That often seems unsung.
Let loose the songs of love
So you will feel the ease of joy.
That brings life into us now.
Kiss me back to life, revive my heart.
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very cool poem Rose, very cool..
strong emotions well expressed
i relate so well to the addiction...
love that last verse..
well written work here...
take care
jm

There are places inside our souls -
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts -
that need to be loved this much.
~jm~

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

2 posted 2000-08-04 12:28 PM

thank you so much JanetMarie It's so true for me I often do get caught up in my own demise but to feel the way it makes me feel is worth the heart being open.

Jenn E
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 589
Kelowna, BC, Canada

3 posted 2000-08-04 12:34 PM

I loved this!! Such emotion. I feel this close to my heart. A wonderful read, even the third time, and I am sure I will read more..............

Jenn E

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

4 posted 2000-08-04 12:42 PM

Thank you Jenn E , It really does come from my heart so glad you felt my words as a reflection so often hidden deep with in my soul, that's what I love about poetry brings out the inner feelings that so often stay cluttered inside.

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