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Only For You Eyes
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Only For You Eyes |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“ONLY FOR YOUR EYES” I smell the fragrance of your lovely brown hair, As we held each other in an embrace, It is so silky-smooth to my loving touch, And I buried its softness into my face. We gazed into each other’s soft gentle eyes, Ours together were so very deep blue. Not one word needs to be spoken, About the way I feel about you. We kiss each other on lips so gentle, Moistness and tenderness have been missed. You are so very real yet untouched by me, Will I ever know of your lips like this? . You stand there with a smile before me, But naked you are not yet. Your robe crumbles as it hits the floor, And I stare at you and never forget. When we gracefully embrace now we’re naked, And feel our warmth radiating all the way through. I then whisper softly in your ear my lover, My mended heart is only for you. As I gently kissed you all over, I could feel your body starting to dance. The fires of passion you have kept inside you, Where just starting to become enhanced. Your lips slowly touched my tender ear, Where you whispered to me so soft. “My darling you have captured my lonely heart, When I felt that I was so dreadfully lost”. Your eyes when they looked they searched me, Pleading to release all the passion you have inside, You said to me “Please help me my gentle darling, I only wait for you to bring it all outside”. You are so very warm inside, just like a burning fire, Your voice coos so softly, and resembles a morning dove. Sighs of your tenderness, coming from within, And I ask, “Will you always want me, if only for my love”? Bill Charles |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Bill.... May I be the first to say how very much I love this one?? It is written with a tenderness that only you can impart.......it is 100% you!!! This is so very special...I'm keeping it in a safe place... Never stop writing, Bill, because I want to keep reading.... I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
*gulp* *sigh* this is so very sensual and lovely. wonderful writing here.. very nice read..indeed... mmm mmm mmm  enjoyed muchly... me thinks you did too LOL take care jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Wow Bill....So very open and honest....to love this way is truely a blessing....cherish it..... your poem was Just Perfect!!!! Julie :) |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
Bill I have read all of your poems and I feel that this is #1. It is sensuous and tender, and makes the reader feel every move. Keep writing! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Sunny.... I am very glad that you liked this work that I put together. Thank you for the gracious comments, as special as they are. And thank you for keeping it in that special place, as I also have done with yours. As long as you read, I'll do my best to continue to write. Thanks Sunny, as I am very touched by your comments. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Janet Marie, Thank you for coming by and reading this poem that I have done. Your comments are very gracious, and I do appreciate what you have said. Thank you again Janet Marie. JulieAnn, You are so very kind to express how you felt about this writing. Thank you so very much. I love to write and wish that I could do it all day, every day. Thanks for coming by. HI ddgoose, Thank you once again for collaborating on "An Ode To Us", I loved the way it came out. Let's do it again soon. And thank you for your comments. |
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