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Open Poetry #9
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Michael G
Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2000-08-03 03:54 PM


What potion is bliss
that controls my heart
to travel so far
I think me the fool
for my moments
my daze of hunger
my want of feeling
but, all that is gone
once I saw you
your eyes control me
set my senses free.

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Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-08-03 04:08 PM


Bliss indeed...
love this one...
so much emotion spoke so perfectly
in so few tender words
jm

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