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When You Know |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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When You Know I heard it as soft it came sounds of rain streaked windowpane and I knew song of devotion smooth love’s potion waves of emotion as soft it came and he knew then the touch said too much reality and such ‘twas in that touch so we knew never a step without you dear never know fear always sincere it’d be us two in the rain of emotion’s touch 3 August 2000 ©Karilea Rilling Jungel |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Oh Karilea, You are on a roll.... WOW many times over... ............. so we knew never a step without you dear never know fear always sincere it’d be us two in the rain of emotion’s touch ...... this is just part of it... actually wanted the whole thing pasted back here...  My regards, sudhir |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
We cannot fully appreciate sunshine, without a bit of rain!!! I certainly appreciate this beautiful poem today...... I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sudhir, Sunny1 - without your support and encouragement, wonder where I'd be...? THANKS! Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Karilea, a beautiful piece. Very beautiful. "I am melancholy, flower cutting through stone" manic street preachers |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Brian, you're welcome. Very welcome! Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I really like that "in the rain of emotions touch." Sudhir's right you're on a roll... this is an excellent piece, love the structure and the title the deep blend of emotion. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
y'all talking about rolls is making me hungry, so I'll just eat up your words of praise and smile for the rest of the day! Thank you Ethome! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Here comes the sunshine... A spectacular poem Lady Sunshine... Coco "then the touch said too much" "in the rain of emotion's touch" Oh how I enjoyed these verses! |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~Absolutely Superb!~ |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Wonderful poem, Sunshine. Dee |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
A touch can speak volumes can't it my friend? These poems are just flowing out of you aren't they??? Well, I'm not complaining, keep them coming!!! Excellent!! ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Sunshine, Loved this! How can one write of a touch this special without a rain scene! Enjoyed this much.. Marcy |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Coco, this surprised me, coming back up from the archives, thank you... thank you, Beth and Dee... yes, Sven, it can... thanks, Marcy...and by the way, I saw TWO feathers the other day...a large one, and a small one, and thought of you and your son... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I liked a lot,Sunshine!!!!!! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
What a sweet emotion you have put words to |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ladies, thank you... |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
you are enormously and beautifully creative - this is great! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mr. Yeats...you sound as if you can reach out and "know" me...which suits me...thank you! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
ahhh my friend has done it once again. A little bit of rain to cleanse the air is natures way of showing she really does care. Loved it....NOW SMILE FOR ME PLEASE. |
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