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courtney923
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since 2000-07-30
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0 posted 2000-08-03 03:12 PM


Waterfall of pain
Rolling down, with ice of veins
Morbid red, penetrating to all of sight
Flowing to the river, fierce like fire
Carrying along, beneath it's break
Passing rocks, and debree from my heart
Combing this river, a look at tragedy
For all this water, and how it came to be
Began as a teardrop, and gushed with speed
The river of souls, lost and not wanted
Throw your pole in, and you will see
The tug of this cast, may be the last
Burried in turmoil, rotting down this way
Screaming your eternity, inside your past
Adding to the power, of this magic splash


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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
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1 posted 2000-08-03 03:16 PM


Your angst is showing...hope things lighten up for you soon!

Karilea
When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
2 posted 2000-08-03 03:17 PM


WOW,
such a powerful form of expression...

well written, courtney...

This is the first of yours that I have read... so allow me to say WELCOME TO PASSIONS  

regards,
sudhir.

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