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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
When I was the most blue God chose and sent me you. A hope which glowed A miracle flowed. Sent from heaven above To remind me how to feel love. Tears of truth You touched my youth. Smiles of endearment A voice of procurement. Blue satin eyes Wisdom beyond the wise. A destiny's gate A miracle of fate. Sent to make me feel Found in me a soul to heal. Gave me hope to rise above Your heart filled with only love. Memories cherished A dream perished. And now you're gone from view But left me with my heart anew. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Memories cherished A dream perished. And now you're gone from view But left me with my heart anew. .... lovely sentiments here ... sort of sad... but then the last word gives a sign of hope... regards, sudhir |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Sudhir-Thank you for reading and your kind words of response. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
OH fellow Gemini..you write my heart with this one... gifts of an angel for sure... I know of this you speak of... beautiful verse and tribute...truely soulmates never leave our hearts ... take care jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Janet Marie-Thank you for reading and your understanding, a soul mate he was and is, as he remains in my heart. |
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courtney923 Junior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 43 |
Great river of inspiration, passed down by beuty and spirituality, lovely. I really like this poem. |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
And now you're gone from view But left me with my heart anew I loved those two lines, I hope one day I feel the last one. I liked this very much. Jenn E |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Courtney 923-Thank you for your thoughtful and kind words. Jenn E-Thank you for responding and I know that some day you too will feel a heart anew. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Gave me hope to rise above Your heart filled with only love. Memories cherished A dream perished. And now you're gone from view But left me with my heart anew. Sentimental sadness ending with much hope. This was a lovely piece and I enjoyed it much. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Gemini~ When love enters and leaves us with fond remembrances and a renewed spirit ... we are so fortunate. A lovely telling this is. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Mark and Marge-It's been a while, but I am finding sunshine through the clouds and there is a ray of hope which is getting me through, thank you both for reading, glad you liked and thank you for your kind words. |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
What a great gift to have.....great writing!!!  Julie :) |
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