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The Sigh That I Heard Yesterday
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The Sigh That I Heard Yesterday |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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The Sigh That I Heard Yesterday Extraordinary thing happened of the sigh I heard just yesterday people stopped and people listened they heard the sigh too, they say, they conjectured, oh they wondered if something had happened to you they looked about askance and inquiries ‘round about flew to see if there was anything that they could do for you and had you known or perchance had felt that in their minds your sigh had dwelt you would have known of their concern for you so do not think you dwell without for care and interest is all about and when next you sigh, give kind thought and realize the love that is wrought. 3 August 2000 Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh, this is so lovely Sunshine ... one never knows how deeply their love is felt by others, how wonderful that you can write your feelings in this beautiful way so that they know! Wonderful!  Best wishes, /Kit [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 08-03-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
As a good friend will atest...I am weakened by a good sigh and the follow up to your sigh brings me to my knees. Well done and keep those thoughts floating among us. Wonderful muse you have. |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
As soon as I saw the title I had to read this, as I was wondering about the sigh you wrote about yesterday! Thanks...its like a serial poem "Life is like music; it must be composed by ear, feeling, and instinct, not by rule."~ Samuel Butler ~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
*sigh* regards to you Karilea, Sudhir |
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linda munday Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315Adelaide, Australia |
Sighing..breating deeply. Liked it a lot Linda M. |
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linda munday Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315Adelaide, Australia |
oops...i meant breathing deeply.....lol blame the champagne...lol It took me 5 mins. plus to post this replly...ol Linda M. I loved the poem too..... see ya. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kit, kind words indeed, thank you... Mark - on your knees much then? I'll go locate some pads {sigh} LOL! thanks!... Tess, you're quite welcome! thanks!... Sudhir, {~,^}... Linda...LOL at you! Champagne, so early? Good for you!... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Love this poem, and the last lines particularly. Very beautifully written catalinamoon |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Beautifully written ... and strangly enough it reminds me of the people here at Passions |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ A true friend knows you well enough - to know where your sighs come from. I like this piece. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
True friends are all around us, even when we think they are not. This was a very sweet peice. Jenn E |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Hi Sunshine, Sighing! Simply beautiful. Touching. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
a poetically perfect *sigh* Sun, simply lovely in its sweet sincerity... LOL at Mark ... On your knees AGAIN Mark baby?!!??!!??!! well, it is where your at your best   better make those knee pads heavy duty Sun  LOL..never have I seen a poet so easy for a *sigh* (poetically speaking...OF COURSE) later-*sighing*gators jm |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
To those of you who've heard the sigh from the first gone by and bye of Passionate friends 'tis was written the "sigh" is for all those smitten. Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Karilea----got them pads yet? JM- OF course!!!--- only poetically speaking.!!! .LOL ( my best? - ya think?) That was fun huh. Seems to me that you----ahh no one wants to here that anyway.LOLKarilea-I came back for another listen to your "sigh" and got more than I bargained for....thanks girls....sigh away....  [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 08-07-2000).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mark - heavy duty and that you came back, not only to read, and sigh, but yet again comment, why, that's one of the finest compliments that can be given... so {sigh} you made my day... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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