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lburn158
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since 2000-07-09
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0 posted 2000-08-03 01:22 AM


What a wonderful way to go
and fix my broken heart,
to come back into my life,
when I was so close
by almost forgetting about you.
You came back with your empty words
and your broken promises.
Only to tear me down a little bit more.
Why is that when I"m with you
that I lose my senses and there isn't
anything for me to say because I can't
even talk since you stole the air around me,
just as quick as you stole my heart.


[This message has been edited by lburn158 (edited 08-03-2000).]

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Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina
1 posted 2000-08-03 01:33 AM


beautiful
I can't even talk since you stole the air around me , just as quick as you stole me heart. very nice words bring out so much feelings in them.

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