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You Are God's Child
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You Are God's Child |
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topnotch707 Junior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 16vallejo, cali, usa |
The beginning of this poem was written by my uncle right before he passed away. I finished the poem in memory of him . He is greatly missed ! Forever i'll be king, because I hold the light, with sword in hand, I reach across the sky To light the light that gives me wings to fly. Soaring across the sky to reach the promised land, out of the clouds appears a helping hand Parting the clouds so I can see hard to belive it was all for me. You are God's child, you are. You are God's child, a star. You are the king of stars child you are. A golden light brighter than the sun, I looked up and began to run the castle built so perfectly for me I love you child can't you see? You are God's child, you are You are God's child, a star You are the king of stars child you are. I reached out and touched his hand I finally reached the promised land, it reminds me of my very last day I love you child more than I can say. You are God's child, you are You are God's child a star You are the king of stars child you are. - Randy and Rebecca Vieu (C) |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a beautiful piece, my friend. I'm sure you made your uncle proud. Keep up the good work! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Wonderful the way you finished this off...well done  This is a very tender and beautiful piece Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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