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United In Friendship, Parted In Anger
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United In Friendship, Parted In Anger |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California 
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United in Friendship, Parted In Anger My blood runs cold and rough churning in my veins, producing anger in abundance. Tempted my spirit was until you bestowed destruction upon me. Why must souls in union clash, can not all travel in unison if invited to ride together lifts road, why must you devour me whole. United in friendship, parted in anger, look at your pain on my soul. Life does hurt you and in return you destroy my spirit, do you like what you see is that it. In silence I keep my tongue hoping for rest, but on going you pure out your hateful words and demand my obedience, defeated due to personality calmness I follow your way to misery’s domain. I stand finally solid in strength gathered from all points of my soul, to show you, your ways are damaging, you deny my appeals until you break my control with outbursts from deep with in me. Help me to understand what it is that you are aiming for, because I am blind to the end results, for they produce conflict in my minds eye. This ride has maintained forward motion for many a year, but of yet I do not love the ride. Please take the time off from my presence and determine what it is you desire from me. Without anger until you I exist, but when you wander in to my domain dark and heavy the air becomes making it hard to breath. I can not do much more it is up to you, and you alone from this point on, weather you believe so or not. United in friendship, parted in anger why must you end it this way. By, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Sometimes there is no good way to end, and if it can't be sweet, make it short, I always say....and I like a well written rant cerenity, thank you. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cerenity~ I see and feel such ache in this. Honey .... you cannot change others but you can change the way they affect you. 'Without anger until you I exist, but when you wander in to my domain dark and heavy the air becomes making it hard to breath.' You need to BREATHE, my friend. People only do things to you - that you let them do ! You are somebody ! Be somebody who commands the respect and love she deserves. *HUGS* again I send. Love you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Serenity, Have thought all night about the wisdom you imparted thank you. Hi Marge, You are so right and I know this, but this is not the way its supose to be, friends do not do this and I find that now adays it is as if I were from a different world and am talking a forion langage. Manners alone would dicktate not doing some things like what she has done to me year after year. But then my personality is calm and reservered I beleive in listening and understanding to the best of my abilty before openning my mouth. I do not want to learn this side of life or except it, but some times the fight to keep what I feel is right becomes to much to bare, thanks Marge Girl your wisdom is shining through as always. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
[This message has been edited by Cerenity (edited 08-03-2000).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
ditto Marge on this , you need to BREATHE... but a nicely expressed poem... regards, sudhir |
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