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That Magical Place
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That Magical Place |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Alone in my bed in the pale moonlight. Looking forward to another peaceful night. Knowing I'll visit that magical place Where once again I will see your face. Spirits of the night are coming again. As sleep overtakes me and dreams begin. Though we only met a short time ago, You're back in my dreams and taking control. You have the key to the door of my dreams. But I'm not really sure just what this means. Tell me, are we each other's destiny? Or is this just a trick being played on me? Voices now come alive in my head. As I become tangled in your web. The threads weave silently around my heart. And I no longer feel lost in the dark. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Eloise, This one is lovely.... what a feeling to have... Nicely done... regards, sudhir |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
i agree with sudhir! this is a lovely piece..and im certain you must have very lovely dreams as well! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very very beautiful, Eloise! I love this!  Denise |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Sudhir, thank you so much for your kind words. poutprincess, thanks and I do, at times, have wonderful dreams!  Denise, so glad you liked it. Thank you. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Eloise* This is absolutely beautiful work.....you let me fall into your dream through your weave...thank you~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eloise~ May the Dream Catcher filter many good visions to you in peaceful slumber. Wonderfully done, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful and magical portrayal I fell right into the lines .....very enjoyable read. |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Bdc, your welcome and anytime. Thank you! Marge, what a sweet comment, thank you. ethome, thank you and I'm glad you liked it. |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
That was some wonderful writing there! Thanks for sharing. Sauni Sauni :) Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Oh How I love this one, you have no idea how you have made me feel......your words spoke straight to my heart, and it says thank you. Jenn E |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Saunni, thank you for reading. Jenn, your welcome. I'm glad that you enjoyed it. |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
such enchantment in every word, Its so true of our dreams sometimes I myself wonder where they come from. They do say dreams have meanings. |
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