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lburn158
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since 2000-07-09
Posts 5
0 posted 2000-08-02 11:05 PM

I left my heart open for you to come in,
I was meaning to say no,
but you got the best of me.
I trusted you again,
put my heart on my sleeves,
and for that you took off with it.
Leaving me here to wonder why
and all I can do is sit here and cry.
My thinking gets me nowhere,
and loving you gave me nothing,
except broken promises, and empty words
and my heart being shattered.
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Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
1 posted 2000-08-02 11:16 PM

So much pain aching off the page....wish I
could say that I haven't been here
but....most of us have, it's not
weakness...just faith and hope that we will
be loved as we love.....someday I'm sure you
will be...don't quit hoping or having
faith...both will carry on.  Excellent
writing~
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2004-05-02 07:34 PM

yeah...I agree
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