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Saviour
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA 
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How simply amazing life can be. You go down different roads and paths So many different twists and turns Full of hardships and laughter I remember feeling so all alone Lost in the world with no where to go Life raging and storming all around Tears like raindrops flowing down I never thought I’d see the sun. Come out from behind the clouds I felt like I was quickly sinking Spiraling further and further down. And then, one day, I found you And there appeared a ray of sun Cutting through the darkness Enticing hope inside my heart And now here you are by my side Offering me a gentle warm hand To hold me up, to pull me though To be there to catch me when I fall You have filled my life with so much love You are a part of me in so many ways My friend, my lover, my strength, and saviour I love you more than words could ever say |
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T McCoy Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 186 |
awesome! very inspiring...it leaves me happy for you, sincerely. I know how great it is to have what you just said...cheers to you! Tony |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Tony - Aww thank you. I have waited a long time for the love I have now. However, it was definately worth the wait  |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
i agree with tony....this is a very inspiring and uplifting piece! and i too am left feeling joy for you! always, a job well done! |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
poutprincess - Thank you again  I'm glad you liked it. |
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Spirit2572 Junior Member
since 2000-07-29
Posts 15 |
I liked this poem... I'm happy you found your love. Spirit2572 |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a glowing tribute to the love you share RosePetals ... just beautiful, such a positive and uplifting verse! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I think I can only say to this...best wishes... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
Very positive and uplifting. Hope for us all hey ? "Life is like music; it must be composed by ear, feeling, and instinct, not by rule."~ Samuel Butler ~ |
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