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I Heard A Sigh
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I Heard A Sigh |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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I Heard A Sigh It was soft and yet harsh a silent opening for a question but no answers could be formed… so the question remained unasked. Then I heard it again louder now, exasperated perhaps another opening ~ but would it only be interference? Listening closely, all became silent and in response, all I could do was sigh. ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 2 August 2000 |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunshine, A little different perhaps, but very true. This was enjoyable to read, and left myself pondering, about the question. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
*sigh* sometimes, you have to take that opening. . . other times, there are no words. . . wonderful my friend. . . -------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Intriguing... ...remarkable Karilea, My regards, Sudhir... |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Sunshine.... Sometimes no words need be spoken..... only a sigh..... (loved it!!) ~~ To Live is to Give ~~ |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Incredible piece ((sigh))  Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you all...it was just one of those "moments..." Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Hi Sunshine I'm in to moments of nothingness at the moment,and this reflects that,so I love it. These moments are so loud don't you think,and sometimes last forever. Sometimes a moment is to long For me to sing my lone sad song And then I heard the sound at last It was only another second....past Best wishes Jon |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Such emotion is often expelled on a sigh. You did it just right. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
I found this intriguing...wondering who made the sigh..and what happened next? "Life is like music; it must be composed by ear, feeling, and instinct, not by rule."~ Samuel Butler ~ |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Jon, Marge, Tess...thank you all for your comments. Tess...I'll have to work on that...perhaps the answer will be found later today... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Very provoking into the thought. I loved the sigh as well...it lends to this perfectly. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mark, aren't sighs great? They lend themselves to the moment... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
don't we all have those moments? |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
beautiful!!!! |
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