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Dancing With Roses
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Dancing With Roses |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven 
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Dancing with Roses Haiku summer raindrops dance upon fallen rose petals each step brings more down this one is in season pdv...lol Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
a beautiful image "I am melancholy, flower cutting through stone" manic street preachers |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
WOW,a beautiful image indeed Jamie. I really love this one  |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is lovely Jamie! And I see that it's summer..when is the season over for roses? Winter? What then?  |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Jamie, Lovely.....like the rose.... LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Prometheus~ Why the title alone is such a poetic thought. The whirl around the dance floor ... an added bonus ! You've a great talent for this lovely form. I enjoy them so much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Prometheus, What an image you have portrayed, very nice. summer raindrops dance |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Jamie...the scent of the rose, the taste of the rain...and the dance...enchanting never say never |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Brian-- Thanks Maree-- Glad you think so, and glad you could enjoy it. PDV-- Have I never shown you my snow roses???? Thanks for reading. Lone Wolf-- Thank you for the reply Marge-- I always look forward to reading yours...you always seem to take so much time and put so much thought into each one. Thanks bunches. Bill--- Thanks for taking time to share with me. Paula-- Where were you hiding when I wrote this???...lol Thanks Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Jamie.... As I read this, I'm watching the summer rain in Alaska falling on my roses!! How's that for timing? This was truly beautiful.... I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Tis in season for sure. Beautiful image you have grown amongst your garden of verse. |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Such beauty from so few words. Simply lovely. Bonnie |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
How can one make such beautiful images appear with so few words? Jamie, this is just lovely! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Jamie--a lovely image you've created here with just a few words...well done! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 {~,^} Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Jamie, another haiku and I am now feeling a bit jealous...  I haven't even managed one and you pen them with ease and at will... and so wonderfully well... regards, sudhir |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Sunny1-- was it a waltzing rain or one of these southern hoedown(pours) mark-- thanks so much BSC- thank you bonnie Kit- Glad you enjoyed it Martie- Thanks for reading it sunshine-- Can you come dry up all the rain??? Dudhir-- Thanks for the kind reply-- I am sure if you wanted to write one it would be great. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
LOL.. not in California! The only rain we get here in the summer is the humidity! Beautiful Jamie! |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Short simple and sweet!! Very good description of the weather we ahve been having latelty...  Julie :) |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
So much said in so few words, what a beutiful pitcure you paint. Thank You. Jenn E |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Christopher-- thanks-- get those lawn sprinklers up on the roof--- julie-- thanks so much Jenn E-- thank you-- [This message has been edited by Prometheus (edited 08-04-2000).] |
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Tanga Junior Member
since 2000-07-02
Posts 39BC Canada |
Oh the lingering perfume of the dancing rose petals. ooolalalalooo...<**> |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Prometheus, Haiku scented with love. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
cool...now ,may i join in the rain dance too? |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
hehe--- just being a devil--  |
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Tanga Junior Member
since 2000-07-02
Posts 39BC Canada |
Oh my, has this dancing devil left something behind? Eyes twinkling** Hugss<**> |
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