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ma miller
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 806


0 posted 2000-08-02 01:27 PM


untruth to tame ...

the forgetting may never come
a time shared embeds deep
my mistake, still i shy from
from my wounds, still the weep

a begged forgiveness crawls
on knees not worthy of my weight
but a continual plead enthralls
the battle within be my fate

my hope keeps the sleeping pain
my sorrow sheds tears of shame
but love has redeemed me again
the beast of untruth to tame


M.A. Miller
08.02.00


My calling before me, let quill be my offering;
For to be called poet, no greater gift to receive.

M.A.



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Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
1 posted 2000-08-02 01:38 PM


Excellent...
perfectly flavoured as usual, your poetry is a delicacy...

regards, sudhir

ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
2 posted 2000-08-03 03:43 AM


I agree with Sudhir, very tastefully done and a pleasure to read.
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