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rosepetals25
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0 posted 2000-08-02 01:15 PM


My heart opens
      As I lay here, watching you sleep
      Listening your peaceful even breaths
My heart opens
     When I hear your soft voice
     Whispering words of your love
My heart opens
     When I see your green eyes
     Lighting up in a smile
My heart opens
      Hearing your laughter
      That warms me within
My heart opens
      Feeling your soft touch
      Giving pleasure I’ve never known
My heart opens
      As I dream of our future together
      How lucky I am that because of you
My heart opens



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poutprincess
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1 posted 2000-08-02 01:25 PM


ah..and this opens my heart!  
so lovely and sincere!

rosepetals25
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2 posted 2000-08-02 03:13 PM


poutprincess - I'm glad you liked it. I wrote about someone very special to me. I'm glad it came across as sincere as I feel.  
T McCoy
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3 posted 2000-08-02 03:19 PM


rosepetals...
This is bursting with sincerity!  Great writing...short and powerful!
Tony  

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