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courtney923
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since 2000-07-30
Posts 43


0 posted 2000-08-02 10:49 AM


Ripping my heart, beating in pain
Where is yours, for you needed mine
I should be used to, abuse of this kind
Still it hurts, and I don't know why
Attacked by the masses, for stating my mind
If poetry is wrong, I cannot be right
Is it my fault, my mind don't stop
Shunned for nothing, you carry this role
Should I bow, unto your prescence
Maybe you despise me, for being this way
Is that a reason, to destroy me
I am human, it's hard to believe
My heart cracks, just as easy
My blood is red, and my tears still drain
Does it really matter, I can't say



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since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764
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1 posted 2000-08-03 03:36 PM


I wonder why no one replied to this lovely, moving poem. Great work!!!

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

Michael G
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since 2000-06-25
Posts 579
Nashville
2 posted 2000-08-03 03:51 PM


good stuff here, I like your edge and the way you express it..........
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