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Take This |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Take this, it is my hand-- take this, and come with me... Meet me, come understand, Meet me in a living land... Feel a rhythm, sing my soul, every hue of rainbow, gold... Release me, I own you the key, Release release this spark of free-- touch me, take the best of me... make me understand. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Release release this spark of free-- touch me, take the best of me... make me understand. ... serenity, The longing is so very evident... nicely done... regards, sudhir |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ Suffice it to say - the title grabbed me !  'Meet me, come understand, Meet me in a living land...' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Meet me, come understand, Meet me in a living land... Feel a rhythm, sing my soul, every hue of rainbow, gold... Release me, I own you the key, Release release this spark of free-- touch me, take the best of me... make me understand. ====================== my my my...if this aint sunshine and heaven kissed... love this me twin tis sweet serenity defined... so how is my goddess today  *kisskiss* me |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
ah, this found a warm spot within me..and im going to keep it there! loved it! |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Well-written and well expressed, serenity. Hey serenity, I'm sorry to say that Heavy Mental Part 2 won't be posted due to technical problems with my computer (damn) but, thanks for your wonderful post. Once again, good poem. Nathan Nathan |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I like the style, serenity |
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T McCoy Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 186 |
that is beautiful serenity...for real. great style...i loved this one. hope he took your hand...or at least gets the sense to! Tony |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Is it okay if I say "thanks" to everybody? You guys are just so good for me... and thanks Tony, ya made me smile, ya did... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderful serenity. . . only a fool would refuse such an offer. . . --------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Serenity* I really like this.....the style and the flow work with this idea great!! And Sven is right......only a fool |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
There are many here that I would find very interesting to meet in the fresh air with a living smile |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Love it! And here I thought by the title I would see something of the sort of, take this job and shove it. LOL Great job!! <*\\\>< The will of God will never lead you, where the grace of God cannot keep you. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Wonderful style and beautiful words. This would make any man worth his grain say yes and snatch up that hand quick. Great read. |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Great title and wonderful style here. I hope he took your hand, if not, TELL me who it is and I will kick him in the butt! LOL Soft Smiles to you Jenn E |
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