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sosweet82
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since 2000-08-02
Posts 17
Phoenix, AZ

0 posted 2000-08-02 06:00 AM


You tried to hold on
And tried to be so very strong
I watched as your eyes became black
We all cried and asked you to come back
It was your time to be set free
No one will understand what that did to me
I don't know if I will ever have a friend like you
I don't even know now what I should do
Everyone said that the pain would go away
Now I'm waiting for that day
You and I have been friends for years
Thinking what I miss the most brings me to tears
As I look in the mirror I'm watching my heart cry
God, why did she have to die?


This was wrote about my bestfriend who just died a few weeks ago. I miss and love you Denna!


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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-08-02 07:06 AM


Sweet~
My condolences for your loss.
You've expressed it well.
Welcome to Passion's poetic hearth.
~*Marge*~


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WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
2 posted 2000-08-02 11:37 PM


This is so sad, but yet full of memory and love.  I'm sorry for such a loss! The memories remain and that will always stay in your heart.
HUGS

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The will of God will never lead you, where the grace of God cannot keep you.


Beth
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 468
WA, Australia
3 posted 2000-08-03 03:47 AM


I am so sorry to hear of your loss. A death in family or friends hurts but you have shown that memories are what helps...You penned this very nicely!
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