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topnotch707
Junior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 16
vallejo, cali, usa

0 posted 2000-08-02 05:03 AM


Please, God
tell me he'll stay.
Do not take him from me
I promise to obey.
Please, God
i've made mistakes before.
But if you will forgive me
I won't betray him anymore.
Please, God
keep him in my life.
We've been through too much
to let it end this time.
Please, God
I send him all my love.
I love him with all my heart
like he was sent from above.
Please, God
listen to me pray.
Please bring my baby back to me
please bring him back today.

- Rebecca Vieu (C)



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WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
1 posted 2000-08-02 11:31 PM


We have first names in common  
I want to welcome you as I haven't had the chance to do so before.

I hope things work out well. When God is in control, things will always work out for the best!  

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The will of God will never lead you, where the grace of God cannot keep you.


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