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Forgive Me
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Forgive Me |
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topnotch707 Junior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 16vallejo, cali, usa |
Everything I do is wrong I can see it in your eyes. Maybe we'd be better off telling eachother lies. The mistakes i've made some big, some small But we always said forever that means through it all. I can't erase the past but I'll live to be strong I'll love you forever through the right and the wrong. Without you in my life I just don't feel the same I never said it's your fault I know it's me to blame. But if you will forgive me maybe we can go on I'll do everything I can to make it last and long. So if you'll please forgive me I've got one thing to say I'll never betray your trust and I'll love you even more each and every day. - Rebecca Vieu (C) |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Trying to make people cry , aren't you?  Great touching poem.!!!!!!Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
I felt this more then you know. I am on the receiving end of those words right now, and a second chance has been given, I hope he is true in his actions as you are in words in this poem. Thanks for this. Jenn E |
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