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Learning Loves' Lullabye...written with Jeffrey Carter
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Learning Loves' Lullabye...written with Jeffrey Carter |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Come lay your head here on my shoulder Hold your body close to mine Feel our hearts beat to the rhythm Of a lovers lullabye. Sweet surrender in the moonlight Tender sighs from pleasured lips Honeyed warmth and satin treasures As we play this lullaby. Trembling fingers touch your body Learning pleasure lost from sight Meld together in the silence Hoping that we get this right Learning to love once again As we play this lullabye. Thanks Jeff |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Boy you two sure do a make a great team....This was very nice.....  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey Paula that's got a great flow to it. You and Jeffery might be a great song lyric team, never know til you try. This is a beautiful ballad type of poem. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Lullabyes are suppose to make ya sleepy... this is arrousing... very nice you two... spicy and nicey later-sensual-lullabye-gators jm |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
"Learning to love once again" is such a beautiful experience. Makes you feel alive again, awakened. The flow of it all took my breath away. Take Care |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula and Jeffrey~ A nice visual - well done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
WOW, so very well done this one... accolades to you both... regards, sudhir |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
What a poetic team you too make....I'd hate to have to play tag team against you both  |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Thank you everyone....I must give Paula most of the credit for this one....she writes very well Paula, it was truly an honor to write with you....would love to do it again sometime |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Julie Ann thanks...Jeff is a wonderful inspiration ethome...I dont thimk either one of us had thought of this as a song...maybe we should? JM...lol girl who wants to sleep? Thanks Jenn E....thanks for reading us...this was our first, but hopefully not our last, together. Marge...thanks Jeff is great Sudhir...I give all the credit to my partner in this. hoot_owl_m...we do work well together...thank you. Jeffrey...the honor is mine. I cant wait for the next time. never say never |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Nice work you two!! Very sweet lullabye. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lovely and sweet.  |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Thanks Jenn...hope you dont mind... Ms. deVine...thank you kindly never say never |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Very well done you two. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Well done the two of you. I must agree with the crowd.....you two make a great team. The lullabye must be the afterglow cause that is where this one is headed...quick!!! A tip of this cowboy's hat to the both of you. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Eloise...thanks...it was easy with the great partner I had. Mark...well thank you kindly cowboy...we appreciate that muchly. never say never |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Paula...anytime my friend (ptn) Jenn.... Thanks, looking forward to writing with you again  Sharon.... Thank you....this was all Paula's creation Eloise.... Thanks....Paula is a remarkable writer Mark (Mr. Cowboy) Bohannon.... Thanks...interesting take on this....I tip my cowboy hat back to ya Again I would like to thank Paula for allowing me the chance to write with her. You are very talented My friend The best and most beaytiful things in the world cannot be seen or touched...but are felt in the heart (Helen Keller) |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Jeff...you make me blush my friend never say never |
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