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Self Assurance |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa 
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God your pathetic, How did this become? With pains anesthetic your helplessly numb and what are you thinking with that self pollution your constantly drinking is that a solution? you wait by the phone be damned if it rings so you sit alone over thinking things is it at all worth it? just bury this pain don’t ever unearth it its all been in vane your life, it keeps going if wanted or not there’s no shame in knowing what you haven’t got so what if she hurt you why cant you realize she didn’t dessert you so open your eyes you’ve got a great friend and your letting her go she’s there ‘till the end and that’s special you know but your time together grows shorter each day so keep her forever and lock her away deep inside your heart where you always can tell good things at the start will always end well |
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Angel Sighs And Smiles Junior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 16 |
Sad and sweet. An excellent piece of work. Great job! |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
This is a great outlook on a broken relationship Kevin. You always write with your heart and soul. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kevin~ Letting go hurts but holding on sometimes hurts more. 'keep her forever and lock her away deep inside your heart' Sometimes it's about moving on ... and making sure there are still good memories to keep. Hugs, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Ok, Kevin, I'll take your advice....  |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
you always impress me! every word very well stated.....with a message that rings clear and true....great job once again! |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
well I'll be the first to say I'm shocked that with all the traffic goin on lately that some of the finest poets here are still reading little ol me's work angel, I thank you for your kindness Mar, I would hope everyone does, hehe your always there for me, thanks for lending your self if only for just a minute MARGE! keep em coming, the hugs that is =) Deer, Me offering you advice? has the world turned upside down? PP, aim to please, but impress? maybe not, thank you |
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courtney923 Junior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 43 |
That was really beautiful. Brought tears to my eyes. Alot of heart went into this one. |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~I agree with Marge completely...Letting go hurts but holding the love can hurt you further...A well written poem here~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Excellent writing...you really have a good attitude about all this...James |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
Courtney, all poetry is from the heart =) beth, I have to hold on, with or without the pain Jmlee, sometimes my attitude is what I think she wants me to be |
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