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spiked
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since 2000-01-13
Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

0 posted 2000-08-01 11:21 PM



Consumed by thoughts
Of utter loss
My mind is froze
Refrained, untaught.

Passed over by
My frame of mind
I have no view
I see no lines

This writer’s block
Encompassed me
Blurs my view
No passion seen

So stroke me light
Feel not the strain
Of wanting more
No thought contained.

Just keep in mind
My heart does bleed
I do not wait
I must concede

That life goes on
No give or take
This life we live
Is what we make.


© Copyright 2000 Richard Rendall - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-08-01 11:44 PM


ahh my friend,I feel your pain...
it is such a drag when we get hit with a
dose of block...my muse stays mad at me
but this is an awesome poem sir...

"This writer’s block
Encompassed me
Blurs my view
No passion seen

So stroke me light
Feel not the strain
Of wanting more
No thought contained.

Just keep in mind
My heart does bleed
I do not wait
I must concede

That life goes on
No give or take
This life we live
Is what we make.
=========================
very cool verses..and much wisdom in the last one.
take care
jm


"looking all around the room,
I see the clutter and the gloom,
Im not only black...Im not only numb...
~gin blossoms~

There are places inside our souls -
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts -
that need to be loved this much.
~jm~


spiked
Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873
Hammond, La USA
2 posted 2000-08-02 06:25 PM


Thank you JM
Hard sometimes to overcome the blocks emotions can bring.
Rich

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

3 posted 2000-08-02 07:39 PM


Who's your buddy?  I AM...if ya need to talk, I've got an ear...(((((you)))))
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