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(parenthetical love)
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
(parenthetical love) the pained chest (a love broken) seeks only rest (with no words spoken) the hurt spirit (more than a friend) never to commit (lovers 'til the end) the aching heart (a gaping divide) from time apart (the day love died) M.A. Miller 08.01.00 My calling before me, let quill be my offering; For to be called poet, no greater gift to receive. M.A. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
What a treasure I found. This is such a sad duet...glad i could bring it back to the top |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
thanks so much for the kind words, Paula ... |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Parenthetically, a perfect parallel piece. I admire your creativity. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
a word of praise from Meadowmuse sent from the heavens for my use her words to touch not just my heart but give pure light upon every part thanks Claire ... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I hate seeing good work fall victim to the Passionate Plummet - I can't believe this wonderful poem waited so long for a response - Three great poems in one is what I see... Nice work, MA..  |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
I agree, great work, very creative.....love this.....so simply it speaks so clearly to a heart |
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