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Leaves Chasing
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Leaves Chasing |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii 
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Is all I see grown beneath the trees, the true spirit of my heart, burnt with the light in the dark. With steps on stone, my feet walk alone, until the path is split. I've sank in deep where the dawn awakes and the frost creeps. I have stayed to watch the wild change. And the rosy rusted leaves have fallen off the trees to chase after me, with the wind as their kin, shaking circles of worlds surround me in turns of all words. Let go, let grow, let rest be done. How shallow is the waters of the sun? We've all come to calm the weakened one. Kindly, Redheart Angrybraids |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful RedHeart! Your imagery is just lovely in this verse ... very nicely penned!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
gotta' love this, RA ... nice piece ... |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Your words always reach me. *sigh* I let them take me, and it's wonderful, always. I enjoy your poetry...your mind tickling verses. Take care now. *Peace. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RedHeartAngryBraids~ Oh, gentle little spirit ... how this touches who you are ... 'And the rosy rusted leaves have fallen off the trees to chase after me,' How very, very lovely, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
And I love this: "How shallow is the waters of the sun?" this is a thought to go a million lightyears....oy...vay...methinks I'll sleep on that... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Let go, let grow, let rest be done. How shallow is the waters of the sun? We've all come to calm the weakened one. ..... Amazing poem... Many excellent lines... regards, Sudhir |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
"How shallow is the waters of the sun." You have penned such a wonderful work of delight and insight here. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
And this too: "I have stayed to watch the wild change..." back up you go, this is awesome. |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
thank you every one, ya'll always help get me back on my feet, some times i'm so overwhelmed with all the wondreful comments i don't know what to say cuz thank you sounds so formal, but unformally, and truely thank you all so kindly. Kindly, Redheart Angrybraids |
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