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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA 
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Memories I remember your gentle touch Your warm hand on mine Your soft lips I remember your sweet words Tumbling from your lips Flowing easily I remember the look in your eyes When you looked at me Into my soul I remember how you made me feel Like I was the only one So very special It’s easy to stay lost in past days When times where good Happy, blissful I know that I must move forward Dealing with the pain Gaining strength But for now I just want to hide In the consuming warmth Of memories. |
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Spirit2572 Junior Member
since 2000-07-29
Posts 15 |
How it nice it is to get wrapped up in memories.. I liked this poem. Spirit2572 |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Ah Maureen, those memories, curse or gift, I truly wonder. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Spirit - Thank you for reading  Bill - ~points to the name~ hehe.. rosepetals..aka Tara not Maureen.. ~chuckles~ Thanks for stopping in to read  |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Such sweet and tender memories RosePetals ... a lovely and flowing verse, very nicely penned indeed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Kit - Aww..thank you! And congrats again on your 2000th post. Boy do I have a long way to go..lol. |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
But for now I just want to hide In the consuming warmth Of memories. loved the phrase above especially am giggling..was trying to decide if I had changed my name or not... ~~soft smiles, Tara Maureen |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
So Beautiful........."Move Forward" very hard to do sometimes when memories are a warmer place to be. I liked the read very much. Jenn E |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Maureen - Thank you hehe.. you are still you..lolJenn - I'm glad you stopped in. Thank you |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
By the way Jenn.. Welcome to Passions |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
it would be nice to have a wealth of warm memories to fall back on....would be lovely to revel in them for a while! this is a beautiful poem.....very much enjoyed...and continue to let those memories inspire you while you march on into your future! |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
poutprincess - I'm glad you liked my poem. And yes it is nice to have those memories to get lost in every now and then |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RosePetals~ It is nice to be able to move forward ... but, take time to luxuriate in the bubbles of the past from time to time. Wonderful read, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
now I remember too Lovely poem like I said it brought back some old memories If I should fall again, then they will laugh but what if just this one I rise? Avanti Rao |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
very nice i must say...wonderful words you've got here and such serene thoughts! salooma |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
I am getting behind in responding to the replies aren''t I? hehe Marge - I completely agree with you  ) Thanks for stopping in to read.Anvanti - I'm glad you liked it Salooma - Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. |
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