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Passionate Level |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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Well, excuse me, my Passion is showing... It's just like a cup overflowing... And hard as I try, my P-level is high... I will live, and I'll die with it growing... I have always had something to say... It comes out in a Passionate way... Then it ends up in rhyme, happens any old time... My P-level knows no night or day... I look down at my hand with the pen... Poised to write, don't know what, don't know when... But in P-level groove, when my pen starts to move, Then my P-muse is at it again... There are days when it writes words like: 'funning'... Only thing that is rhymes with is: 'cunning'... Put my muse to the test, does it's P-level best.. To come up with a rhyme that is: 'stunning'... Now my P-level's dropped from it's height... I must go read what others must write... It's a head-trip, you see... But, at least this one's free... So I'm off to the Passionate site!!! ~~ To Live is to Give ~~ [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 08-01-2000).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunny, This is very enjoyable to read and so lovely. Once again you have written something with your soft heart, and I like it! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Bill... Thank you for your kindness!!! I'm glad you read this.... My muse must have been on a 'cute' binge, and this is what happened!! ~~ To Live is to Give ~~ |
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