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Showers of flourescent rain
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Showers of flourescent rain |
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courtney923 Junior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 43 |
I'm going up, but feeling down Finding a heart, until mine gets found But in the distance, I unwound This tainted feeling, a humble sound Take these feelings, buried deep beneath the ground Showers of flourescent rain, hitting the top and all around Held me back, but now I'm bound Pushed me away, and began to hound It's really painful, when everything is loud Throw it in a pile, and make a mound To come back tomorrow, and break it down It's in my head, I can hear it pound Fading away, but it's still round As I try, I fall to my feet Knowing this feeling, will never be |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
was sort of a pounding rhythm to this... nice ~~softly Maureen |
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courtney923 Junior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 43 |
Thanks alot. |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
A ring of sadness this has....very well done, I enjoyed!  *Krista Knutson* "You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back." -Barbara DeAngelis |
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