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If I Could Only |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! 
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Do I need to tell you? Do you want to hear? Are you listening? Do you even care? Is it the bright lights getting to your eyes? Maybe all the smoke becomes your disguise Close enough to taste your sweat Baby I'm willing to place my bet Got to get a little closer to the heat And I'll be frozen in time Until we meet... I am sure the girls are lining up at your door Just dieing to adore But baby that's not what I am here for You're used to the ladies crooning over you I'll show you that they haven't got a clue Baby let me show what I can do... Let's find a place to be alone Lock the doors Turn off the phone Speaking in hushed whispers Touching my skin of glitters And I won't chase in the morning light I know your life, living in the lime light If only I could touch you Feel your breath on my back If only I could feel you I just couldn't hold back And we'll meet under The full moon Tell me baby that it will be soon.... Julie :) |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
JulieAnn..... This was a great read....but got a question....Is this person, your love interest, a musician by any chance? Go for it, girl!!!!! (Musicians need all the good-lovin' they can get!!!) ~~ To Live is to Give ~~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
JulieAnn, this is excellent. . . and I'm sure that you can change his mind. . . Wonderful my friend. . . --------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Sunny~~Well I am partial to musicians...I guess I haven't learned my lesson yet....They are too much fun!!  But thank you for the reply....Sven~~! I am not worthy!!! Thank you it means a lot from someone who writes as well as you do.... Julie :) |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
ah..this is great! with words like these..you can have anything you want! |
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sosweet82 Junior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 17Phoenix, AZ |
That was great, you write from the heart and I love that. |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Thank you P.P.~~~And I wish I could have anything I want!!! Sosweet~~~Thank you you are too kind....Are you new to this site??? I haven't read anything by you yet looks like I'll have to do a search!! Thank you again..... Julie :) |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
enjoyed your poem Julie ... a very lucky guy to have captured your interest Best of luck  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love that ending |
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