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epoet
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since 2000-05-11
Posts 291
grand rapid,MI, usa

0 posted 2000-08-01 12:42 PM


Conformity to social norms,
not for me.
I am who I am
not who society wants me to be.

Why is it so hard
for you to see?
I believe things
that you don't.

Therefore, you fit
and I just won't.
I was raised
to think freely.

Believe in myself
and act accordingly.
Just because you
want me to change,
doesn't mean I will.

You need to understand
my morals and beliefs,
they are a part of me
not even time can change.

© Copyright 2000 Pat Kotrch - All Rights Reserved
Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration
1 posted 2000-08-01 01:25 PM


I like where you're headed with this poem... I too value free thinking. Therefore, wouldn't:

Therefore, you fit
and I just won't.
I was raised
to think freely.


Be a contradiction?



Christopher

Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
2 posted 2000-08-01 01:59 PM


Well said Epoet ... to stand on ones own beliefs and not bow to change ... wonderful verse!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

poutprincess
Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia
3 posted 2000-08-02 04:13 AM


i admire anyone who stands strong for their beliefs.....but i also recognize that even though some people appear to be conforming, it just means that they are truly following their heart, even if that leads them along with the masses. well done poem..always continue to follow your own calling in life.
WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
4 posted 2000-08-02 11:39 PM


Good for you! You shouldn't let others make you out to be something you're not. Way to go!

Loved it!

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The will of God will never lead you, where the grace of God cannot keep you.


epoet
Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 291
grand rapid,MI, usa
5 posted 2000-08-05 11:01 PM


thank you one and all.  this poem was started when I went into the service.  haven't figured out where to go with this.

P. J. Kotrch
carpe diem
A soul once touched is a soul once blessed by love


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