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Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

0 posted 2000-08-01 11:08 AM

This poem's been on here a while back....I reposted it because, I'm ready to type part two on the board.
For all the ones who haven't and the ones who have read it, enjoy!!

My thoughts blast off like a skyrocket,
with the ability,
to defy gravity.
Search your pockets
and check your watches,
because the time has cometh,
for people to ressurect their conscious.
When will people wake up from their dreams?
When will they see,
that life is what they believe?
Before they know it,
reality will come down crashing,
quicker than lightning.
I'm traveling through space,
quicker than the speed of light,
changing the flights,
of comets and meteorites.
I've turned asteroids,
into colloids and alloys,
as my soul,
has unfolded into a black hole
as it's beyond the point of resusitation
but, it's elevated and emancipated
like the slaves
but, 900,000 miles,
under a grave.
I've dreamed of reaching the Holyland,
befriending Moses, and breaking bread with Abraham,
explaining to him that it's my destination,
to seek purification of my soul,
because I know,
that it's black as coal
as I've been seeking mental pleasure for some time,
as my mind is fixin to erupt like a land mine.
I'm searching in space, for a place,
to be my permanent terrace,
as God knows my mode,
of unidentification like a UFO,
planning invasions,
abducting civilizations,
giving mutilations,
in underground military installations.
I'm walking on the globe,
with a holy robe,
ready to claim my throne,
to the top
as it's been my righteous home,
since my universal knowledge,
is too advanced for college.
On a metaphysical plane,
my thoughts in my brain,
become flammable like propane.
I wear a permanent mark on my body like Cane
but, its all in God's name.
My thoughts circulate and radiate like sonic waves,
as my mind gets deeper and darker than old caves.
I've been through it all,
trials and tribulations,
and has yet to fall.
People, take my words seriously,
or face the montonomy,
of a lost oppotunity
because my rhymes are essential
as well as heavy mental.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2000-08-01 01:10 PM

I like yer message, Mr. Nate Dogg, looking forward to reading part II.

courtney923
Junior Member

since 2000-07-30

Posts 43

2 posted 2000-08-01 07:31 PM

I'm feeling heavily mental today, so it was a good day to read your poem. It was great and I'll be waiting for part two.

Jenn E
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 589
Kelowna, BC, Canada

3 posted 2000-08-23 07:12 PM

I say Yaaaaaa, No, I say Hell Yaaaaaaa!!!!! This was awsome....your words, everything. POWERFUL, WOW!!!! You are a very deep "Dogg".

Jenn E

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

4 posted 2000-08-24 06:04 PM

Thank you Jenn, for your sweet comments...You've got me smiling here.

Nathan

Jenn E
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 589
Kelowna, BC, Canada

5 posted 2000-08-24 07:18 PM

I got him smilimg......

Blushes...

The fact is I ABSOLUTELY loved all of your words and how it was all put to together.

Jenn E

JnR4eva
Member

since 2000-08-07

Posts 377
Bronx, NY

6 posted 2000-08-24 07:20 PM

nice

you have done a beautiful job of picturing your intellectual deepness..and with an uncanny style of writing too..nice work nate dogg..truly unique

"my love is my motivation
my love is my inspiration
perception of this poem
is your interpretation"
-- me

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