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This life |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
I have heard of shadows who's movement's create the wind. Of stars so mystified they cause their light to bend. Of changes in the tide that comes from the moons great heart. Of pleasures to this Earth that we have yet to impart. But one thing I have learned in my short time alive. Is how to love with my soul and share it with your eyes. Those eyes that sent me to you only to have to leave. My heart did break away for I swore we were to be. And now I console myself with knowing you as I do. My heart will grow with yours through out these years we bring. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
This is exquisite!! The imagery you created is some of the best I've seen...and this place is filled with masters! I especially loved...... "But one thing I have learned in my short time alive. Is how to love with my soul and share it with your eyes." Beauty and sadness all rolled together to make a most magnificent weave....wonderful work~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Michael... "...how to love with my soul, and share it with your eyes..." That has to be one of the most expressive lines I've read here!! This is beautiful! ~~ To Live is to Give ~~ |
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EWDrake Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 183NC, USA |
Such a masterfully lucid write of lament and acceptence. Well done, Sir. EWD |
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EWDrake Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 183NC, USA |
Such a masterfully lucid write of lament and acceptence. Well done, Sir. EWD |
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EWDrake Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 183NC, USA |
Such a masterfully lucid write of lament and acceptence. Well done, Sir. EWD |
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EWDrake Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 183NC, USA |
My apologies, Sir, server glitch sent me into a spiral....oops..... |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
BDC- thankyou for putting me in that group, I felt rather inspired........ Sunny- Hey you, glad you liked, always nice to hear from you...... EWD- Thankyou kind sir for the compliment.... So glad you all enjoyed it.......... |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
I love the way you penned the third verse Michael. It is wonderful writing. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
But one thing I have learned in my short time alive. Is how to love with my soul and share it with your eyes. Those eyes that sent me to you only to have to leave. My heart did break away for I swore we were to be. And now I console myself with knowing you as I do. My heart will grow with yours through out these years we bring. ====================== oh i do so adore the way you write... the depth of emotion is most impressive and enticing my friend... "Is how to love with my soul and share it with your eyes." simply amazing line... simply perfect later-deep-gator jm |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Michael--very beautifully done! |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
marina- your kind words mean alot..... JM- I'm just another love sick poet..lol.. Thank you...... Martie- thanks for your reply....... |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Oh Michael. All I can say i your inspiration must be re thinking all she has done and loving you more with each passing day. You remind us all with your poetry to think with your heart, to really listen to it. I am sure she did'nt for if she had she would be with you in the way it was ment. She will love you forever, this I am sure of. As Always Jenn E |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
Oh, how I was instantly pulled in by "I have heard of shadows who's movement's create the wind. Of stars so mystified they cause their light to bend." And once my expectations were up... you never let me down! Magnificent!! -jaimie Website: www.ladysixstring.com |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Well Michael, I suppose you don't need another compliment, but I feel I must..This is beautiful. I truly love it. Images, style, flow, all of it. astareae |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
beautiful! Corinne |
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CAVECANEM Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 43Nevada USA |
what else is there to say that hasn't been said..... "Life can only be understood backwards; but it must be lived forward" Soren Kierkegaard |
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