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JustinEdward
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since 2000-07-31
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0 posted 2000-07-31 11:50 PM


Run Away
Why oh why do I even try,

All I do is make them cry,

I keep it locked away down deep inside and try to figure out the answer,

My problems have overtaken all,

Everyone needs a way to releive all their soul,

The medicene has become apparent,
  
I must find a way to try

If I don't I'll surely die,

The answer comes to me in a vision,

I see myself away from all retention,

Run away is what I say, run away and there I shall stay.


                           - Justin Davis -


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Erin
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since 2000-06-15
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1 posted 2000-08-01 12:31 PM


isnt this a poem??? you put it in the wrong place if it is. it was really good though.

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

Dusk Treader
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since 1999-06-18
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2 posted 2000-08-01 01:29 AM


Erin is right here, this is indeed a poem and so I will be moving it to Open #9 for you, where it should get more posts, if you have any questions, email me! Thank you.

Abrahm Simons

"Keep on dreamin' boy 'cause when you stop dreaming it's time to die" - Blind Melon

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