when you left here i surrendered my mind to a place in time it must've froze man i can't remember the last time you weren't on my mind
but my memory is decomposing either that or i'm goin' blind i see your face right here before me i try to focus on your eyes
...but the image fogs you blur and fade away...
- chorus -
can't get you off of my mind i swear i'm frozen in time somethings wrong with my mind my memory must've been re-aligned cause every thought i have leads back to you reality re-defined and jammed on automatic rewind it keeps you here by my side addicted to that place in time and all my thoughts inject a random fix of you
can't get you off of my mind i play you back and rewind to keep you here by my side so i can gaze into your eyes
...until the image fogs and blurs and fades away...
- time grabs you by the wrist directs you where to go so make the best of this test and don't ask why it's not a question but a lesson learned in time
[This message has been edited by T McCoy (edited 08-01-2000).]
Tony this is excellent..such depth of emotion... very well written... this is the first work of yours Ive read I believe..sorry, so many new poets of late its getting hard to keep up. but i will look for your work in the future. very cool song..perfect title.. a belated welcome to passions from me take care jm
There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~
jm...thanks for the kind words and the welcome... serenity...hmmm...i can hold the rhythm on bass...drums are pure FUN...but i pretend to sing! yea, this is all of it; first verse just gets repeated...i think the repitition adds to the whole "rewind" thing. you? sincere thanks serenity, as always...
beth...thank you...i haven't seen your name out there yet, but i'll be on the lookout...
LOL at sen' saying I can sing.. serenity can sing Tony... I hear shes a legend down on the French Quarter my little Mardi Gras songbird. if i sing YOU ALL are gonna need backup LOL but I have always wanted to be a groupie.. perhaps I can be the official guitar pic person LOL ( i gotta watch me twin sen' every minute) shes always volunteering me for something later-poet-gators im going to bed jm
New Brunswick Canada
I like that - image fogs - part at the end. These are great lyrics...ballad I think ......good hook good title...feels to me like minor key or major seventh.....maybe minor and major mix-up in the chorus.
Oh geeze...Those two singing? ROFLMAO Take it from me sir....uh....are they listening? hehehe (ducking down behind monitor) **shaking head furiously!** Although Janet does write some good country lyrics - I'm not sure you look like country though! This was really good, I'm still trying to put my finger on the style this reminds me of. GO LEAFS!
"Fantasies enrich our lives to the fullest, but true satisfaction comes from creating your own story in the real world! Live out your fantasies & mak
~Hey there,...the title definately kix here. This poem/song is flowing with realism,...just so able to see it all. T...this part here..."all my thoughts inject a random fix of you",....that is so right on! So what happens. Ouch! Awesome work. Take care. *Peace.