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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“LOVERS” Long dark brown hair floating on the breeze, And blue eyes that sparkle in the moonlight. You know how much I love you, It will be a special time, to be one tonight. We will lie naked and so close together, Whispering about how much we care. Wondering about this magic love of ours, Sharing it with each other, because we dare. I will kiss you ever so gently, Soft and deep, as you have never known. No words will need to be spoken, Our lips will seal what we have sown. Your soft moist lips will touch mine, And you’ll sigh, only as you do. I will hold you, love you, and explore, In so many ways, that will always please you. I feel your body so warm, Your lips are burning with delight. I’ll be your lover my darling, Our passions will overflow, during this night. Our bodies are on fire, Closer we cannot get. I feel your warmth overtake me, It will be a night never to forget. Then we make love together, Until I become a part of you. This is what we both wanted, And you will carry it forever through. I know that I will always love you, My love I found, under that special star. Even after the last time I look at you, And after I close my eyes, and drift off afar. Bill Charles 6/21/00 7:17 AM |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
Bill Every time I read one of your poems I must take a cold shower. This one is beautiful and expresses your love with great emotion. Lucky lady - Well done! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi ddgoose, A cold shower? My, I must take this as a compliment. Thank you for coming by to my humble place, and for the very gracious comments. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Bill, Wow, you are quite the romantic I see!! I love this one. The images are so soft and subtle. She is one lucky lady to get showered with such love and affection. Wonderful read!!  Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Bill, ~sighs~ Brilliant as usual rosepetals |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Ok Bill... This completes my billing of you as an utter ROMANTIC.... and I hope you take this as a compliment... regards, sudhir |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Bill... What can I say to this except that it is simply exquisite!!!!!! Mmmmmmmm......what a tender loving man you are..... My screen is hot to the touch!!! ~~ To Live is to Give ~~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hello Lone Wolf, Yes, romance is in my heart, and I am glad that I can express some of it in the things that I write. Thank you for your kind comments, and thanks for coming by. Hi rosepetals25, Thank you so very much for your kindness, I'm glad that you liked this poem. Sudhir Iyer my friend, Your graciousness with your kind compliments are taken as a compliment. Thank you once again for coming by. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Bill- you are one hopeless romantic. Every one of your poems are filled with such tender heart felt emotions and this exceeds them all. Wonderful write my friend. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Good morning Sunny, Thank you for your most welcome and touching comments. What can I say, except that I am inspired by faces that I see, and poems that I read. My screen is of romance, may it never die! Thank you Sunny. |
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