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Where I fly

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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 07-31-2000 11:41 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

           Where I fly    

In the bright of the night
When clouds play with light.
Nymphs seem to dance
Where the shadows enhance.

And the wind in its way
Sets the movement in play
As visions appear
That are clearly unclear.

Gestures of grace  
Thoughts made of lace.
A stage that hangs snow
A strange mistletoe.

It is here I romance
With my mind in a trance
The whimsy of dream
Fulfillment of seem.

It is here that I fly
Just my lover and I.

© Copyright 2000 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Sudhir Iyer
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1 posted 07-31-2000 11:43 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

What a lovely flight, Seymour...

I wanna fly too...

regards,
sudhir
chibi_dragon
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2 posted 07-31-2000 12:53 PM       View Profile for chibi_dragon   Email chibi_dragon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for chibi_dragon

True and to the point. I like it!!  
--Chibi
Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 07-31-2000 02:26 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Sudhir,
I'm sure you can fly, thanks.

Chibi,
Thanks for the read and like.
beowulf_26
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4 posted 07-31-2000 02:56 PM       View Profile for beowulf_26   Email beowulf_26   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for beowulf_26

thank you for that refreshing little lapse of reality.  

Unrequited love sucks.
Andrew Scott
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5 posted 07-31-2000 04:14 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Sir Tabin... Yours is a dream within a dream... a read with the perfect air and the lightest touch.  A nice feeling.  My compliments.
Sunshine
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6 posted 07-31-2000 04:36 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

You know, I was going to pick out a part that struck me as "the best" and I would then be silly, posting back your entire piece here...love it!

Karilea
When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ
Meadowmuse
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7 posted 07-31-2000 05:08 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

So pretty, Seymour.

~ Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau

Balladeer
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8 posted 07-31-2000 05:17 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Sy, if you fly over Rock Island, be sure to wave. I wouldn't want to miss it!

I DO like the poem, though. Your poetry's flying high for sure.  
Nate Dogg
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9 posted 07-31-2000 06:00 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

A soft and graceful piece, Brillant writing from a brilliant poet.

Your words are like magic before my eyes,
as world of poet Gods, is where you fly.



Nathan
Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 07-31-2000 08:17 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Beowulf,
You welcome and thanks for the read and comment.

Andrew,
Very nice coment, thank you.

Sunshine,
Thank you for the love it. *L*

Claire,
Thanks for the pretty.

Balladeer,
Flew over your house 2 o pm where were you?
Thanks.

Nate,
Wonderful comment, thank you.
Tennessee Angel
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11 posted 07-31-2000 11:12 PM       View Profile for Tennessee Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tennessee Angel

This definately deserves a bump to the top my friend!!  

--You can either take me as I am...or you can watch me as I go.--
HM3
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12 posted 07-31-2000 11:31 PM       View Profile for HM3   Email HM3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for HM3

Thanks for the dance. . . with wings





Work like money doesn't matter, love like you've never been hurt, dance like nobody's watching...


Marge Tindal
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13 posted 08-01-2000 03:35 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Seymour~
I so enjoy reading your poetry.

Did I ever tell you that I share your
verse with my poetry group ...
they are enthralled.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Seymour Tabin
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Tennessee,
Thank you for the read and bump.

HM3,
You are welcome to the dance.

Marge,
You are really something, I am honored. *L*
poutprincess
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15 posted 08-02-2000 02:26 PM       View Profile for poutprincess   Email poutprincess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poutprincess

oh this is divine! glad i stopped in to read.....cause i now leave with wings!
Elizabeth Santos
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16 posted 08-02-2000 03:37 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

I haven't been able to spend much time on the forum and this one almost slipped by me.
This is such a beautiful poem, I think one of my favorites, and I'm so glad I found it
Liz
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Alison
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18 posted 03-10-2013 01:44 AM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

Sy, I hope that you are still flying.  You are very missed.  Your poetry always struck me as gentle and beautiful.  You have taught me a lot as I read.

Alison
 
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