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Rare Bouquet |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Rare Bouquet ~*Marge Tindal*~ I swirl you within crystal-wined stem As you pour over me from the cellars of time Your bouquet deeply flavored touching rarity not often savored I toast you in the memory of one moment in time Simply to be deeply enjoyed So I do over and over intoxicated by you ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Marge, you come up with such splendid visuals... accompanied by such wonderful thoughts... regards, sudhir |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
I'll drink to that. Love the glass  Jon |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Mmmm have not had a fine port in a wee while  thanks Marge for such vivid imagery and reminder of how long it's been since that last drink  Luv Ya Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sudhir~ I thank you for your compliments. You know that I love these little beauties that spill from the quill. Jon~ Thank you. Memories fill the glass with loving thoughts. Tracie~ I drink in the beauty of those who would fill the glass with 'Rare Bouquet'. Thank you for the reply, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Mmmmmmm ... loved this tasty treasure Marge! Your words flowed even sweeter than the wine, my friend ... beautiful thoughts! Best wishes, /Kit |
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EWDrake Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 183NC, USA |
Wonderfully creative verse, warm words and the form...intriguing! Very nicely done. *S* Evan |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sweetie, Oh how your pour such beautiful love out in rhyme, just so beautiful Marge. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Lovesick_Proletariat Junior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 11 |
cool.....no compliment here i dont agree with..... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kit~ What a pleasure to read your replies. Thank you. EWDrake~ Glad to intrigue you. Thanks for the reply. Cerenity~ My little buddy, Here's to ya', gal. Thanks always for being your sweet self. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Marge your glass runneth over with tasteful words and beautiful tapered phrases .....marvelous mood. take care...ethome.. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You are so clever!!! You make me smile, even when I don't wanna...love ya much, Marge, thank you... |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Don't much like wine, Marge, but certainly did enjoy the poem! jwesley |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ETHome~ Thanks for the lovely reply. I loved 'tapered phrases' .... poetry by itself ! Serenity~ Smile - darn you - SMILE   JWesley~ Well, my friend ... neither do I ! I DO love the 'Rare Bouquet' of memories that poured over me. I'll take a double ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Well, go ahead and fill mine up, and here's a toast to you and your wonderful muse. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LovesickPro~ I apologize for missing your reply.  Thank you so much for your comments. Eloise~ SKOAL ! That little muse is smiling for sure ! Thank you for the reply. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Marge, if you'll have me over, I promise to whine all night!!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Balladeer~ Come on, baby ! Bring it on ! I'll pop your cork ! You just slay me .... I said S L A Y ! Love ya', Whine On ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ Love the formatting here. Bottoms up!!! LOL. Your poetry, like a fine wine, just gets better and better my friend. Oh to be lost in the bouquet . . . Great writing!! Cool visual!! Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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pandora Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 184 |
when pouring for intoxication just be careful of elation! when you drink deep from silver chalice, shaped so sweetly like a phallus, just remember whine is teasing shining in the glass, so pleasing... enjoy the wine but then, moreover, watch out for the big hangover!  clever poem, ms. marge.... enjoyed! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Marge, What a talent you are. Everytime I read one of your writings I am in deep respect because of it. This is excellent!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
loved it Marge..I have a few like this...some day I will post my patterns..yours are lovely ~~soft hugs M |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoneWolf~ You're such a sweetie to leave such a wonderful reply. I appreciate you. Pandora~ I gather you enjoyed yourself ! Bill~ You humble me with your reply. I thank you sincerely. Maureen~ Thanks. Would love to see yours. Mine don't intentionally start off that way .... but something triggers them to begin to take shape and I go with the flow. I guess the 'thoughts' pouring over me needed a glass to hold them ? ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Better and better it gets.....fill me up one more time there Marge-dear.....beautiful verse. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarkB~ Thank you for such sincerity in your replies. I do so appreciate you. ~*Marge*~< !signature--> ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 08-01-2000).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
To sip from cup and then to sup in company so rare to laugh with glee and merrily is a wish I dare! Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LittleMsSunshine~ You are a delight to this lady. Toasting our friendship ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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