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A Lover's Wish
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A Lover's Wish |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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May you be forever young, and all your wildest dreams come true.. May your heart stay laughing all throughout your days... May you see the one and only one who's always stood by you.. May I be the light to guide you on your way...... May you walk along in sunshine on a beach of golden sand.. May your sky be blue as far as you can see... May there be no threatening storms upon the path on which you stand.. May your future all be bright and trouble-free...... May you find a double rainbow with the biggest pot of gold.. May you always have the best that life can give... May you find me right beside you if you need a hand to hold.. May you have the kind of life you want to live...... May you look back on your days when life is coming to an end.. May your memories not be clouded by a tear... May you know that I am by your side, forever there, my friend.. Just the way I've stood beside you through the years...... May my final wish be taken to the place where it should go.. Inside your heart is where my wish should be... For in my wish I wanted that your heart would surely know.. You had love...all along...for you had me...... ~~ To Live is to Give ~~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sunny1...may I wish that wish for you? This is lovely girl. Thanks for sharing never say never |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
I wish I was!! So good, so very good...... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sunny1~ So very good, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
So many wonderful wishes.... regards, sudhir |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Good morning Sunny, You must have a heart of tenderness, and one that is very caring, to be able to write like this. Giving of yourself, and not wanting, so very, very unselfish. I am very glad that I have had a chance to read words that you have written over the past few weeks. Hope that your day is full of sunshine, spice, and everything nice. Bill..... |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
So sweet and touching Sunny ... this was just lovely!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Anyone who had you would certainly have love, Sunny. Of that I have no doubt  . Beautiful words...... |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Paula.....I thank you.....I wish this for you, also, my friend.. Michael.....thank you, too, and I'm glad you like!! Marge....It's always such a pleasure to see your reply.....thank you so.... Sudhir....There's so many wishes....one for all of us! Thank you! ~~ To Live is to Give ~~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Bill.....Good morning, and I hope you have a truly wonderful day!!! Yes, I'm glad you stopped by, and I really thank you for your kind words! Kit.....Thank you so much.....I am glad to have given some enjoyment with this! Balladeer....What a wonderful reply!! I guess to me, love is the most worthy goal in life. Thank you very much..... ~~ To Live is to Give ~~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
WOW so many wishes for one man.lol This is very tender and sweet and these Irish eyes are a smilin at the thought of that double rainbow....loved the read girl..thanks for sharing. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunny1, Agree with Balladeer, beautiful work. |
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chibi_dragon Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 58 |
Wow. This is some good stuff. Wishes can be very powerful. --Chibi |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
So tender and heart felt. Beautiful read. Then again everything you write I can feel as I read. Very touching. Jenn E |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
SUNNY1,YOU ALWAYS AMZES ME WITH YOUR POEMS.KEEP IT UP. [This message has been edited by vandana (edited 08-23-2000).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sunny, I almost missed this one! Lovely list of wishes, for the lucky person who is in mind. I wish this all for you as well. Take care. Sandra |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww sunny 1 you did it again! what a truly beautiful poem you have penned...I love the flow and the imagery..nicely done sunny1 < !signature-->"my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- me [This message has been edited by JnR4eva (edited 08-23-2000).] |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Very beautiful, Sunny! These are wishes that every heart makes and prays will come true. Great job! --You can either take me as I am...or you can watch me as I go.-- |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Sunny, Your words always seems to flow from your pen so naturally and have such a fresh quality to them. So nicely done, my friend. Michael |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Mark..... Ahhhh....you are a true Irishman, and 'tis not the rainbow that beckons.....'tis the double pot o' gold!!!!!! Thank you, Mark!! Hi Seymour..... Thank you so much!!! That makes me happy!!! Hi Chibi.... Yes....like they say: 'Be careful what you wish for'! Thank you, too! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Jenn E..... Thank you so much for your kind reply!! I really am glad to have you stop in anytime!! Hi Vandana.... You are always so nice!!! Thank you for saying that, and always good to see you!! Hi Sandra.... I wish this for all of my friends and their friends!! Life would be so much better if a wish came true now and then!!!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi JnR4eva.... Thank you, and I really am glad that you enjoyed your reading!! Hi T.A.... I hope these wishes come true for anyone who feels them in their heart. And I thank you for dropping by and your nice reply! Hi Michael.... If my words flow smoothly, it is because I am learning from you, my friend! Thank you, Michael....I love your replies!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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