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Denali Silverwolf
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since 2000-07-29
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0 posted 2000-07-31 12:16 PM


This is a little something I wrote during a very dark time in my life. And I think that this poem clearly defines just how much it hurt at the time.


I've known pain...
Digging, scratching, scraping pain,
Splitting my soul in two
like a knife thrust into my chest,
A pain washed in tears gone dry
and sprinkled in pieces of shattered dreams
Yes, I've known that pain.


I've known loss...
Empty, gaping, expansive loss,
Turning beautiful memories
into a painful black hole,
Standing by in awe as the wrecking ball of life
tears down what the heart has built.
Yes, I've known that loss too.


I've known hate...
Writhing, seething, burning hate.
The sight of nails digging into pillows,
Wishing it was human flesh,
The growing lust for blood and suffering flowers
as thoughts of torture fill your mind
Yes, I've known that hate as well

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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2000-08-02 11:33 PM


Yes..it's evident in your writing that you know it..good poem.  
passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2004-05-02 07:34 PM


dark indeed
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